Red´s First Steps: Page 22
Sep12
Having friends is a good thing. Having (sexy) friends with influence on arkane politics is even better!
EDIT: OK, Robert has had a chance to go over the page, now, so the grammar should be all fixed up.
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Cast
Henry ThorntonRed’s stepfather. Henry is a big time Hollywood producer who was never happy with the nerd that Clarence had become. Then his stepson became a beautiful young woman, and though initially shocked, it didn’t take him long to see her new potential for show business. While he's a little sad that he lost his son, he’s happy to have gained a photogenic daughter. Contrary to popular belief, he is NOT a mobster... or so he claims. Comics: 15 |
LazarraSecond heir of the House of Azure, Lazarra is an intelligent and cold woman, looking to prove herself as the rightful master of the Azure by any means necessary. Alongside other covens, she leads the Southeil Academy in search of natural born witches among the mortals, under her guise as Headmistress Anning. Comics: 14 |
Mary ThorntonMary is an intelligent, beautiful woman who found herself the trophy wife of a prominent Hollywood producer. With her son transformed into a female, she sees it as a happy situation that could possibly bring them closer to each other. Comics: 19 |
MickeyComics: 3 |
Tiffany "Red" ThorntonRed was a boy until a new genie tried to get Melvin a girlfriend. That's when the genie turned Red into a girl so Melvin could practice talking to girls, and forgot to turn her back before disappearing. Red is hopeful that her situation is only temporary. Comics: 226 |
Panel 6: determine. Panel 7: to be, not tobe. Panel 8: SEES.
p.s., Southeil expelled Mary? wonder what she did to cause that screw up.
You mean Beside getting pregnant with Clarence when she was in Southeil high. Don’t know. But, for Mary to convince them to go for her plan, she must have done some real campaigning and stomping around to convince them that it would be a good thing for them to do this. Maybe she told them that Clarence was Melvin friend. I am just guessing now as to why they may have decided to do this for Mary.
Panel 2:to handle all THESE matters
Powerful friends can do a lot of things and that magi that did this to Clarence is some one to look into. They would look into Reds friends to see how this could have happened.
Panel 6: “You are a Walsh women now” mixes singular and plural; it should be either “a Walsh woman” or something like “one of the Walsh women”; the former is easier to fix in the text block
It should also be “whatever Ellie sees in you” instead of “whatever Ellie see in you.”
Grammar issues aside it could be good news for Red on the psychological front if he can convince himself that Ellie sees and accepts the real Red (i.e. Clarence) beyond the surface.
What exactly is a “Walsh” woman? I don’t remember anyone or anything named “Walsh”.
Walsh is Mary’s maiden name, and apparently the name of her witch clan.
If Lazarra is the second heir to the Azure, isn’t Melvin the first heir now? Gee, ya think maybe Lazarra wants to get her hands on Melvin for something other than his best interests?
Wait. When was Lazarra said to be that?
In her Character bio. Hover your mouse over her little portrait under the comic (or tap it on a phone… I think), and you’ll see a short bio on her. Same for the other characters who appear in each page.
Lazarra is in love with Mary.