#137 Eeh, She’s Alright
Dec27
on December 27, 2016
at 11:21 PM
Hey gang, we’re back to the grind. Two weeks of being sick and holiday craziness, couldn’t keep us down! (well, Maggie still has a cough..)
*SPECIAL THANKS* to all of you who have joined the subscribers! We’re off and running. Our dream here at Vault 19, is to do comics for you full time. One dollar is all we ask. If everyone who read the chronicles regularly subscribed for one dollar a month, we would have reached our goal! So, for those who have yet to join, search your hearts, and for those who have joined thank you again from the bottom of our inkwells!
Take care MELVINAUTS!
BACH-MANN
Bach-Mann:
Panel 2:
“LOOSE” -> Lose
“FARE” -> fair
Panel 3:
“struck smitten” is redundant: should be just “smitten”
“ENAMERED” -> enamored
“Enamor” > French “en amour,” in love. Or so its appearance suggest to me.
And Mel again steps up and leads. Good job, kid.
And the plot sickens, I mean thickens. Plenty of question and no answers. And it look like BJ going to take the dive into developing a relationship with Clamor, which most of us have already figured out.